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RE: Dagger(the book)

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 08,2017 3:03 pm by BreyerLover2222

Yeah!! What a coincidence!! :D

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 07,2017 2:22 pm by BreyergirlZ

really? cool!!

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 07,2017 1:54 pm by BreyerLover2222


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thank you!
after i do the movie dagger, and get more into(as in few episodes maybe a season) kingdoms conquer, i think i'll do the lord of the rings. i have the screen play so...

OMG, yah!!! :D I'm reading the LOTR series again right now!!

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 06,2017 2:48 pm by BreyergirlZ

thank you!
after i do the movie dagger, and get more into(as in few episodes maybe a season) kingdoms conquer, i think i'll do the lord of the rings. i have the screen play so...

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 06,2017 2:15 pm by BreyerLover2222


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hahaha! I`m glad you like it. :P

I was kinda thinking I'd like it--I love most of what you do!! Because everything you do is awesome!

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Dec 06,2017 1:08 pm by BreyergirlZ

Thank you strawberry

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 06,2017 1:05 pm by strawberryroan3000

THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

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Dec 05,2017 1:36 pm by BreyergirlZ

hahaha! I`m glad you like it. :P

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 05,2017 1:24 pm by BreyerLover2222


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Thank you!!
I might post chapter 2, but as i said, i don`t want to post the WHOLE book... Could br bad for busisness(i have to make SOME money off the book)
but you might win a free copy. :P

OF COURSE I WANT TO WIN A FREE COPY!!! I love reading, and I love love love the Dagger!!

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 04,2017 1:52 pm by BreyergirlZ

Thank you!!
I might post chapter 2, but as i said, i don`t want to post the WHOLE book... Could br bad for busisness(i have to make SOME money off the book)
but you might win a free copy. :P

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RE: Dagger(the book)

Dec 04,2017 1:43 pm by BreyerLover2222

Z, this is amazing!!! So you're good at movie making, writing stories--what aren't you good at??? THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!! It was thrilling, and you left me wondering what is happening next--I hope Chapter 2 will be coming out soon???? ;D

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Dagger(the book)

Dec 04,2017 12:22 pm by BreyergirlZ

Hey! B-lover you said you want to read the book before the movie comes out, so here is a preview of my book dagger. And i will do a giveaway once it`s finished. :P

Chapter 1

It was a dark,dreary,day. Dark clouds hung over head. The day was appropriate for the occasion. Carlac Herolan, father of the Herolan family, had died the previous night. No one knows how.
Almost no one.
Rowin knew, he was Carlac`s oldest friend and companion. After investigators had found nothing, he examined the crime scene himself. After carefully examining the cup Carlac had used, he noticed it smelled slightly of niferen. A deadly poison found only in certain parts of the country of Kalieser. Rowin also noticed a slight blue tint in the cup, which could only have been left by the poison. Even after washed, anything touched by it would have at least a little blue tint. It was the giveaway of the poison. A investigator wouldn't have noticed the tint in the metal cup, figuring it was just the metal. But Rowin had faced quite a few of assassin`s in his lifetime, and a lot of them used the poison. Especially the Todliche Assassin`s. And now Rowin was waiting for Eliza. So he could take her to a cabin after the funeral and tell her. He wasn't attending the funeral. He knew Marthisa, Carlac's wife, would never let him. She had never liked Rowin and always got angry whenever Carlac had Rowin over for a drink or let him stay the night.
Carlac`s three daughters, Eliza, Asara, and Thesa, slid off their horses and walked to where their mother, Marthisa, was standing.
"Come." she said. And ushered her daughters to where the coffin was. The girls placed perfect, red, beautiful roses on the coffin and stood back. Eliza stepped away from her sisters and mother slightly, almost at the head of the coffin.
Such beautiful roses, and even a beautiful coffin, for such a sad, terrible event. Why? Eliza thought. Her father was, besides Rowin, the person she had been closest too. He wasn’t only her father, he was her best friend. Her only friend. Eliza never made any other friends. Really only leaving their cabin in the wood`s to go to town to get food or fabric, and to go hunting for meat. Carlac had taught Eliza how to hunt when she was 12. How to look for the smallest animal signs, where to shoot different animals, and skinning and cleaning. Hunting had been one of Eliza's favorite things to do with her father. Her mother and younger sisters found it inadequate for a young woman to be doing. Especially Thesa, who was 15. She did very lady like things. Needlepoint, cooking, going to social events, worrying about hair and how she dressed. Eliza was the opposite, not caring for needlepoint,hair, dresses or anything. Besides special event`s, Eliza always wore brown trousers, a forest green shirt, (or brown shirt if the green one was dirty) a hunting vest, and dark brown boots made of untanned leather. Ideal for walking around silently in the woods. But today, she was wearing a long black gown, and hat with a veil. Asara, who was 12, wasn't as ladylike as Thesa or her mother, but not quite as tomboy as Eliza. Eliza looked around quickly, seeing her mothers and sisters sad faces. Thesa gently dabbed her eyes. Eliza`s face could hardly be seen through the veil she wore, but her expression was grim. She remembered her mother scolding her for wearing the veil,
"Why hide your face? Put that veil away!" she had said. And despite her mother’s very lady like opinions, she hated veils. Saying there’s no reason for girls to hide their faces, funeral or not. Besides the Herolans, there were about 20 or 30 other people at the funeral. Eliza didn’t recognize any of them. She wondered why on earth they were at her father’s funeral. She looked at the preacher.
"Today, we celebrate the death of Carlac Hrolan." The preacher started.
Celebrate? Celebrate indeed! I don’t see how my father’s death is anything to celebrate!
Eliza thought angrily. Wishing she could punch the preacher. A thought her mother never would have approved of.
The preacher continued, but Eliza hardly paid any attention. Thoughts were running through her head.
He was a amazing father, the best of all. He was a good man too. Brave, kind, selfless,loyal. He taught me so much. To use a sword, to cook, to survive. He gave me so much. He gave me food, shelter,love. He gave me knowledge. He gave me wisdom. He took me places. He took me to the festivals, for walks in the woods. He loved me, I loved him. Now he`s gone. And the world won`t be the same. Why did he have to die? Why was he killed? It`s always the good people who die...
Once the ceremony was over, Eliza stepped away from the coffin. And started walking toward her horse.
"Eliza." a deep voice called from her right. She turned, someone stood by a tree. She thought it was Rowin, but it was hard to tell with the heavy brown cloak he wore with the cowl that hid a face in it’s shadows.
"Rowin?" she asked. Squinting.
"Yes, come with me. It`s important." Rowin said quietly.
"But..."
"Come."
Eliza got her horse and followed Rowin to a gate. He untied his own bay horse and mounted. Opened the gates and led Eliza through. Then into the woods. It was a silent ride. The woods were even darker then the clouds. The branches seemed to be trying to grab them. Eliza had no idea where they were going. But half an hour later, she found out. They were approaching a cabin. Rowin dismounted and tied his horse to a post. Eliza followed. He ushered her into the cabin, bolting the door behind him. Eliza looked around the room. There was a fire place in the right corner. A stack or wood next to it. On the left was a doorway that probably led to a kitchen. A small table under the window that faced the front. And cabinets and along the right wall. With another small table under them which had a water clock on it.
"I feel as if I've been here before." Eliza said.
Rowin approached the fire place and started a small fire. He placed one more log in and stood up. And threw back his cowl. Eliza could now see his dark hair and face. Rowin had dark eyes, a nose that was slightly crooked and a small scar on his jaw.
"You have. Your father brought you here when you were when you where three. Then locked it up. I have been coming here lately though."
Eliza took off the black hat and veil she had been wearing. Revealing her blonde hair and beautiful face. She had blue eyes. Which where normally quite dazzling. but seemed not as bright and happy as they normally where, due to the death of a loved one. Prominent cheek bones and light pink lips. She was tall. Long legged and athletic.
"I have found out....How your Father was killed." He told her quietly. "He was murdered."
"I....I thought....That...." Eliza replied, her voice broke. Tears ran down her cheeks.
"There there child." Rowin wiped her eyes, pulling her to her into his embrace. "I told you that’s what I thought happened."
"I...I know. But to hear it....a terrible truth, it just...." she sobbed on his shoulder. Her cheek rubbing on the rough fabric of his cloak. She didn’t even bother asking how Rowin knew he was killed. Or how, as the investigators hadn’t found anything as far as she knew.
"I know my dear. Here." he broke from her embrace. He dabbed her cheeks with a square of soft cloth from one of his pockets.
"I have something for you." He walked toward a cabinet. Opened it, and pulled out a box with a lock.
"Being the oldest, you have been assigned to protect this." he ran his hand over the box. "It was your fathers before, then, before the war, he gave it to me to hide. I knew that I must keep it from falling into the wrong hands. Must make sure that it has a good guardian. One who is strong and pure-hearted."
Rowin slowly opened the lid. And pulled out a dagger. It was beautiful. A white handle. With gold designs on it,and a slightly curved blade with writing engraved.
"What is it?"
"It’s a very special dagger. The dagger of Athalon Corsec. It has great power. And makes its user very powerful. But all power has its limits. And if someone breaks through the limits, we could all be destroyed. You do remember who Athalon Corsec is, don’t you?"
"I`ve heard the name.....My father talked about teaching me about him, but never did."
She remembered her father say something about him. And hear Rowin and him talk about him and...Apparently the dagger, sometimes when she was little.
"He was a great ruler. 100 years ago, he and some Exyers, the magic horses, created two magical daggers. This one, given to Athalon. Ment for rulers. It gave him the power to heal, disguise himself, and disappear. Although it does have more powers. Some which we have not used, I have never used it. So don’t I know what all the powers are. Your Father did. The other dagger, black bladed, evil. Not as powerful as this one. Two were created, so the earth would be balanced. If either were destroyed, the earth would be in total turmoil. The eldest of each generation from the Corsec Family were given the dagger to protect. But, when one of the Corsecs were dying, he gave it to your great grandfather. Which turned out to be a mistake.
"When Elise Corsec, the youngest of the Corsec, heard about the dagger, she decided she wanted it. So, she promised that once she had both daggers she would rule the earth and he would be given a position of great power. He went along with it. And tried to get the other dagger. But didn’t get past the guardians."
"Who exactly, are the guardians?" Eliza asked. Once again, it was something she`d heard of, but never actually been taught about.
"They are the most powerful Exyers. So, Elise failed to get the other dagger. She became so angry. She started attacking all the kingdoms. Starting a war. We united with the Exyers. Me your father,our King, and the Exyer council met up and decided the only way to bring the war to an end was to get the dagger from Elise. So me and your father set off. With great difficulty, and help from the dagger, we managed to get it back. That was 15 years ago. And Elise, now known as Lady Dark, has been looking for it ever since."
"Wow." Eliza said quietly. In shock. Exyers from Exyaren, rulers from 100 years ago, and magic daggers.
"Do you accept the challenge? Will you guard the dagger at ALL costs?" Rowin asked.
"At all costs? Rowin, i’m not sure..."
"I know you will be up to the challenge Eliza. Your strong,good,honest, and brave."
"I....I...I accept."
"Here. Keep it safe." Rowin then abruptly threw his cowl up and left. Leaving Eliza staring at the dagger. Awestruck. Wondering.

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